~Moonlight, Work in Progress Short Story~

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~Moonlight, Work in Progress Short Story~

Post by ~Mooneh~ on Mon Jan 21, 2013 2:50 am

This is a short story about a wolf who almost dies and finds an endless forest. Please, constructive criticism only and PLEASE give me any tips. :D

Frost looked around at what was once her pack. All of them had beem shot by hunters. A pain in her hind-leg grew as she tried to get up. She looked at her leg, and was disgusted with the sight. A bullet had been shot, and had impaled itself in her leg. She yelped in pain.

NOT YET FINISHED

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