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Post by Tealight on Mon Feb 24, 2014 9:31 am



Catlin looked up at the tanned face of a camp counselor, Drake or Jake or something. She didn't know his name.

She was trying hard to pay attention to him instead of at the scene going on outside the window: Counselor Lindsay balanced on some guy's shoulders, having some kind of out-of-water chicken fight. It was a world more interesting that the what was coming out of Jake-Drake Counselor's mouth.

"...this camp thing isn't the joke you kids think it is," he was saying. "I'm not about to lose my position because of you idiot kids coming in here thinking it's where you can haul off and fight and get away with it. Do you think you're tough just because you've got a buzz cut and a fist? You know what, I hope you feel really punk right now. I hope you have a really freakin' punk time waiting outside while I call your mommy. Get out of my office, Woods."

Catlin hesitated. The counselor raised his chin, expecting a challenge.

"Is that girl ok?" she asked.

"Ha, absolutely. You broke her freakin' jaw. How long have you done jujitsu?"

"Wado Ryu, actually. Six years."

"You punch a lot of kids?"

"Earlier was my first time using it outside of the dojo."

"That scar by your lip?"

"Bike wreck."

He sighed, pointed a pen. "Well...just, get out of here. Park yourself in one of those punk freakin' chairs."

"Sure."

When Catlin closed the door, all chatter in the room ceased, except for quiet is that hers and yups. One guy offered her a high-five. She passed right by him.

So he said it. Mumbled it just as she was walking away. She could hear it, but no one else.

And she was already getting sent home, so why not?

Catlin swung around and delivered him the same punch that had broken Katie-Karen Finch's jaw.

»Characters can come into the story however, as long as it makes sense. This takes place in the modern era (isn't that a song by The Strokes?), at a summer camp for ages thirteen to seventeen. The thread should be kept realistic and lighthearted for the most part. Have fun. :)
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Re: Bruise [ open ]

Post by Brute on Mon Feb 24, 2014 10:12 am

(Of course, I have to join T's thread, and of course, I have to use my absolutely favourite characters, Kat [younger] and Erica...)

Kat sighed impatiently beside her friend, Erica, who was busy tying her shoe. Erica always liked to spend time tying her shoes, and that just made Kat more pissed, especially today. Kat had been woken up early by a perfectly calm Erica who had told her tat good things were going to happen today, then said to go back to sleep. Kat however never went back to sleep, so she was sleep-deprived and Ms. Grumps.

Kat stamped her foot impatiently. "Hurry up."

"Yeah, I hear you." Erica finished tying a knot, then stood up and stretched. "Did ya hear about that girl who punched another girl in the jaw?"

"Good choice of target. That girl was a no-gooder anyway."

Erica rolled her eyes. "Whatever. Anyways she's probably going to get expelled."

"From a summer camp. That's new."

Erica looked at Kat. "Come on, Kat, there are many other things to do than be grumpy!"

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Post by Tealight on Wed Feb 26, 2014 1:19 am



"What did I tell you?" Another boy said, slapping hands with the kid next to him.

Someone else yelled, "You deserved it, Kennedy! You moron!"

Catlin rubbed her fist and stepped back. Cameron Kennedy was covering his open mouth, staring at her. He had the sort of hair that drooped over his eyes.

He held out his hand, spelled out in slow ASL: you're dead.

Catlin didn't know sign language.

He caught her by the neck. They toppled against the next chair, and her head was slammed against the wall so hard that she felt her brain rattle. He punched. Several times, actually. She spit at him, then applied a painful and effective elbow to the eye, so he let up long enough for her to return the wallops.

The fight could've lasted into the afternoon had someone not pulled them apart. Counselor. He had her shoulder in a grip like iron or steel or some other hardy mineral. He was shaking her and yelling something at Cameron or her or the both of them. Then she was shoved into the plump arms of another girl camper. The girl brought Catlin outside, said her name was Rebecca, and guided her along the dirt trail to the girl's infirmary cabin.
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Post by CPT Revenge Unit #27 on Wed Feb 26, 2014 9:53 am

Upon arrival at the girls infirmary cabin, one would be quite surprised to find three boys seated inside; two were sitting next to eachother and glaring at the third, who sat across from them but was visually very different from them. This third boy was a partial legend throughout the camp, usually referred to as 'The Coat' by his stubbornly different attire, which included a black fedora, an unbuttoned black trench coat sufficiently open to show off not only his white tank top beneath, but his black jeans which would normally be hidden beneath the long bottom of the coat, designed to drag along the ground. His getup was completed with his black combat boots, which were well-known to be steel capped, due to the cause of his infamy. He was usually silent, but he was widely agreed to be one of the camp's most violent members, having started up more fights than a living tree has leaves in the spring, but the most notable thing about said fights was his win to loose ratio, which was a near-perfect 0.98: He won practically every fight he was involved with, with the odd few that were stopped before a victor, resulting in all participants loosing. Despite this, he had never been removed from the camp; Rumours spread that his parents were bribing the camp owner to keep him there, with other less likely rumours being that he was brainwashing said owner somehow. The two boys that sat next to each other were holding tissues to their noses, and also dabbing up blood from various assorted cuts across their faces, while the Coat was occupied wrapping his hands, namely his knuckles, in bandages. Before they could be questioned by the teacher as to why they were in a female area, the boy sitting closest to the door spoke up. "Sorry 'bout the intrusion miss, but we've been put in 'ere due to a certain predicament that resulted in the male infirmary being filled to the brim and not being able to store us." He said in a notably nasal manner. The Coat simply continued watching himself wrapping bandages around the used parts of his hands using his moderately piercing blue eyes, which appeared to glow slightly due to the lighting conditions.

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Post by Tealight on Thu Feb 27, 2014 9:39 pm



Rebecca ushered her up the front steps, into the girl's infirmary. An old woman was lingering in the doorway just as they came in. They assumed, and rightly, that she was the nurse.

"Don't I know it," the ancient lady sighed. "I only just came back from that place. They needed extra hands."

The girls crept in silently, took seats beside the boys with cut-up faces.

The nurse continued, "I have to take some iodine to the boy's infirmary. I won't be long...I hope. Don't break anything. No fighting. Don't dig in the hazard bins. My aide is in the back if any one of you tries to start anything." She retrieved a few iodine bottles from a cabinet by the staircase, the kind that locks. Then she left.

Rebecca sat rigidly, eyes cast down. Catlin slouched, stormy-eyed.

"I wonder how hard would it be to hitchhike from here to Nevada," mused the latter.

Rebecca said, "That's silly."
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Post by Mattyrat97 on Thu Feb 27, 2014 10:42 pm

Kane was sitting on a patch of grass feeding his bird some worms he had dug out of the ground. He was wearing a dark green shirt with sleaves that came all the way down to his wrists, long gray jeans and black lace-up sneakers. His bird was a female Australian wedge tailed eagle named Asuna. Most people considered him a loner and tried to avoid him, they had even herd him talking to Asuna so roomers spread quickly around the camp, some people said that he was insane.
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Re: Bruise [ open ]

Post by Brute on Fri Feb 28, 2014 2:00 pm

(Because Erica and Kat are not exactly troublemakers, snoopy, yes, but not troublemakers, I'll make a real dude, if you don't mind...)

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Post by Tealight on Fri Feb 28, 2014 3:42 pm

(sure, whatever flips your pancake.)
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Post by Brute on Tue Mar 04, 2014 9:51 am

A boy, heavily muscled, walked down the walk, a frivolous blonde skipping along after him. He grinning, cocking his head, and pushed the blonde aside. He strode up to the girl's infirmary and strode in.
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Erica spat. "There goes Maxil Heran, the meanest kid ever to walk the earth."

"That is, until I gave him a nasty black eye."

"True."
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Maxil, as he strode in the room, looked around. He glared at the boys, and admired the injured girls. He noticed the girl whom he had heard had caused some trouble. He smiled, and went over.

He found her hands, and gripped them a bit too hard. "Hey girl," he slurred in his Southern accent. His fierce green eyes stared into hers. "You're mine, girl, whether you like it or not." Maxil was the richest kid in the summer camp, and, since no one wanted to mess with him or his parents, he got whatever he wanted. " I like girls with spunk," he growled into her ear, ten sat down, and strongly pulled her arm, attempting to pull her into his lap. He smirked into the other boys faces. He didn't care what they did.

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Post by Tealight on Tue Mar 04, 2014 11:03 am

"Are you high?" Catlin shrieked.

Rebecca, properly horrified, stood up so abruptly her chair that it slid backwards.

Catlin didn't want to be on this guy's lap any more than she wanted to be at this godforsaken camp. But, like summer camp, it wasn't really a choice she had made for herself. She hadn't figured out a way to break his grip on her arm yet.

She tried to elbow him.

"Leave her alone," warned Rebecca. "There's a teacher's aide in the back. I'll...I'll scream."
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Post by CPT Revenge Unit #27 on Tue Mar 04, 2014 7:52 pm

Jack stood up, having finished wrapping his hand. He stepped across the room to Maxilla slowly, finally stopping where he was almost standing on his toes. He simply stood there, glaring at him for a few moments, before beginning his rapid onslaught of attacks.

His first attack was an attack directed at his left eye, not with a fist but with the base of the palm of his hand, so as to cause more damage to the eyeball itself than the eyesocket, which would result in a black eye. The next attack was situational; Had Maxil not released Catlin with the arm he was using to hold her, he would quickly find the elbow of that arm broken when Jack forced the arm to turn in a manner that would require the elbow to be at the top of the arm, not the bottom. To finish off the attack, Jack sent a solid stomp towards Maxil's 'Where-It-Really-Hurts,' followed by a near karate chop to the neck that, if it landed correctly, would temporarily stop the blood flow to Maxil's brain and render him temporarily unconscious.

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Post by Tealight on Mon Mar 17, 2014 9:41 pm



True to her word, Rebecca screamed, loud enough to alert the nurse's aide in the back and probably wake the dead in the next town over. Catlin quit fighting to cover her ears.

Then, the screen door opened again. It was Cameron Kennedy. He didn't seem very happy to see Catlin, naturally, but this time he didn't say anything. The aide came rushing out from the back about the same time.

"Whut's goin' on? Whut're you all up ter? Who's been screamin'?" the aide huffed. Like Maxil, his accent suggested he came a lot farther south than the rest of them. He had a thick brown beard--well-groomed, not scraggly--and looked rather like a bear. On the opposite side of the room, Cameron closed the door carefully and looked at this bear-like personage through his hair.

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Post by Brute on Tue Apr 01, 2014 2:01 pm

Maxil, naturally, started punching in random directions, deflecting the attack toward his elbow accidentally. "ALRIGHT, you idiot!" He delt a strong hit on Caitlin's head and kicked her hard. Then he centered on the teenage boy in front of him, Jack, and began yelling and kicking: "Oh, yer a stewpid fella, eh? Hear 'at?! Stewpid!"

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A boy nobody had seen before walked into the room. He looked mean; his left eyebrow had a scar through it, his cheeks looked sunburned, and he was around 6 feet all. His black hair was cropped an inch to his skull. He looked mean at first look, but his dark brown eyes were kind, and he put a skip in his step. When he spoke, he had a queer accent, but it was not Southern, nor British-- it was a Mainer's accent. "What's goin' on?" he asked, his deep voice tingling with the question. Then he noticed the boys fighting, and he said, "Duh. My bad." He walked quickly to Caitlin, and picked her up easily, saying, "S'kay. I won't hurt you." He sat her up in a chair away from Maxil. He gave her a quirky smile, then looked over at the two fighting. "This won't end well. But Jack's a good fighter," he said with respect. "Max the Evil is a no-gooder." A grin spread across his face. "Maxil's name was Max before he started beating on girls, y'know. Then, when he became Max the Evil, people just shortened it up." His deep voice was rather calm compared to the current situation.

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Post by CPT Revenge Unit #27 on Sun Apr 06, 2014 1:46 pm

Jack's face showed indifference to Maxil's remarks. It simply gave him a new target.to aim at on him. He quickly swung his right fist at Maxil's face, intending to break his nose. One that was completed, he would use the same arm for the next attack; an elbow to the same eye he had hit before. Jack didn't give up until he won, and now would be no different.

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